The Forgotten Art of Typography

Original Request (My re-write of this request appears further down the page where the bold title is.)

HI

Can re-write poem attached of better writing?
My target audience are teenagers. of uk. I will communicate these messages in a Graphic manse, i mean with in Graphic Design. so the simple the text would be, clear message will be.  Poem:

The Forgotten Art of Typography

Invisibility is the art of good design
Good art fits its environment like a piece in a puzzle.
In some cases it's as logic as in a straight line
Other times you have to nuzzle

At the end you will see that every piece is required
For the end to be like desired
If it's not a part of the message you will send
Then it won't be allowed to stay until the end.

Why is it then
That when people talk with the pen
They forget what message they send
With the letters in the end.

Simple and invisible,
Hidden among the text.
Typography is everywhere
Even in this text.
If you're not aware of it,
The designer has done success.
The typography is for communing
It's the text own prom queen dress.
A text must look well to attract the attention
Even from those who do detention
So spare a moment next time you see an ad,
Is the typography good or bad?

best wishes

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 - My Re-Write of "The Forgotten Art Of Typography"-
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When something looks nice and you don’t know why,
But it just fits in, like a cloud in the sky,
That is an element of good design
Like a perfect curve or words on a line.

Making things work when you’re an artist
Is like putting together pieces of a puzzle.
You want everything to fit just right
But sometimes you have to give things a nuzzle.

When you’ve brought all of the pieces together
You’ll find that every piece is required
The picture will come together completely
And the result will be what you’ve desired.

But sometimes pieces that don’t belong
Get mixed in with your puzzle box.
And if they don’t fit in with the picture
You toss them like a pair of old socks.

What is funny to me then…
Is that when people talk with a pen…
They forget the importance of the message they send…
And leave the letters until the end.

Though the letters are art, it’s invisible simple art,
And it’s often hard to tell one art from the next.
Though you don’t notice, typography is everywhere
(oh by the way) even in this text.

If you're not made aware just by looking,
Then the designer has had success.
Typography is there to brighten things up
It's like giving the text it’s own formal dress.

With the busyness of your normal day
Text must look good to attract your attention.
One way this happens is through dressing text up
But so often the typography receives no mention

But it’s there nonetheless when you look.
So spare a moment next time you see an ad,
And in looking at it, think to yourself…
This typography I’m seeing, is it good or bad?

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This customer then sent a longer message

The reason behind i can not use this beautiful poem, it's because i'm going to use these every lines in graphic design composition, so it become too confusing in visual communication even though in normal term it makes perfect sense.
what i really wanted is simple and short lines, and the poem it self to be simply shorter then now, if that possible.
please let me know asap
best wishes

Here is the shorter re-write I did.

An artist’s work
Like pieces of a puzzle
Must fit just right
Or give it a nuzzle

Non belongings,
In the puzzle box?
If they don’t fit in
Toss like old socks

Invisible art
One like the next
Typography’s everywhere
Even in *this* text

Hidden from you
The artist’s success
Typography gives shine
Like text’s formal dress

In a busy day
Competing for attention
Fancy dress text
Oft gets no mention

It’s there though.
When you next see an ad
Think to yourself…
This typography – good or bad?

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